You are in a White Room: Part Six

Here is the continuation of White Room. Click here for Part I, Part II, Part III, Part IV, and Part V.


You are now in a white hallway. There is no door but the one from which you have come. At both ends, the hallway turns and of course, you do not know where it leads. You look right, left, you do this several times, and then you begin to walk down the hallway. Your legs are rubber. You worry you will fall and someone will hear you. As you round the corner, there is one second where you truly believe your heart will burst, but it does not. Now, you are staring at an identical hallway with the same posters on the walls, one door ajar in the center, and a turn at the end of it. Your agonizingly squeaky steps lead you to the door, and fighting every instinct you have, you step inside. You are in a white room.

Join me this time next week for Part VII.

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3 thoughts on “You are in a White Room: Part Six

  1. Linda Hanna says:

    This reminds me of a nightmare I had years ago. The suspense is agonizing!


  2. Yep–I agree with Linda. The suspense is agonizing. Very intriguing flash fiction. 🙂


  3. Kim Magennis says:

    This is agony Jessica! Nothing but my imagination, and that horrid white room!


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